Wednesday 24 September 2014

Cross Country Run

Last Thursday we had cross country on the field and we gathered together on the concrete. I felt like I was melting on the concrete . The concrete was hot and I wanted a water but we had to wait.

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw my house captains run up to the front of the crowd  cheering for their teams and all the children were cheering with them.  

Thursday 11 September 2014

You are Goldilocks

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.


One summer day I was swing on my swing at my backyard and mum shouted don’t go away goldilocks and I said ok.I saw a yellow butterfly and I look around and I saw a rabbit jump out of the bushes I ran after the rabbit and I got lost at the dark forest i said hello anyone here i look around and I saw a red balloon flying all the way up to the sky and i saw a little house I ran to the house i look out in the window but no one was inside the house but I smell a delicious food and i ate the first food so i ate the food and it was to hot so I went to the second one it was so gooey so I  taste but it was too  gooey so I went to the third one it wasjust delicious .
Goldilocks[edit]